The key problem with its impact is that it is not timely

Mark Magniers article about the crisis of trust in China could have a more powerful impact.The key problem with its impact is that it is not timely we have been dealing with fake, harmful Chinese products here in America for years, and we course expect that without the consumer protection laws that about here at home, consumers in China would be subject to even more terrible scams.This should be viewed as an atrocity of the free market, one which America tamed long ago through consumer movements after we had learned our lesson during the unrestrained capitalism of the early 20th century.But the article lacks passion. Although it is journalistically correct to end sentences in periods, this doesnt mean that they shouldnt have the impact of exclamation points. Take, for example, the following sentence land that farmers have tilled for generations can be seized on a moments notice in a system that doesnt recognize private property.It bumbles awkwardly through a captious point and is s tymied by a few too many prepositional phrases. It leaves the reader unenraged about the fact that what our Founders considered a pillar of society Property, next in line only to Life and Liberty is totally absent from the worlds most populous country.The author of the article is unable to bring the points home. The bollix formula example could easily be reinforced by the image of a sickly Gerber baby, or the reminder that it is a product we have taken for granted for decades. In an article like this one, connecting prominent American brands to the scandals taking place abroad placing the reader in the shoes of the foreigner would have left hand a much more lasting impression than the distant, dispassionate analysis offered here.And lets not start on the hackneyed, irrelevant clich that the author leads with.